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Impressive for 45 minutes...
Looks like there's a very lonely journey ahead -- I am the Comet Kid!!! [link] Hah, you guys are going to beat me down with this aren't you?! (This isn't the first request for one that I've gotten...in the last two days
I need to figure out how I'm doing these first...I don't really have a method...i just slop colors on in scribbles until it looks like what was in my head I will certainly post a link in my journal if I do make one though. The request has been noted! -- -K *eats up happily*
Mmmmmmmmmm, what a landscape. -- My family! A Deviant Tarot Project with this one pretty much everything is right. you've got scale, colours and atmosphere down, and the figure rounds this up nicely and gives it some life. I think my only nitpick is that behind the shadow tings are getting depth-blurred too quickly. like the shadow was some sort of barrier. I think some tightening up there and perhaps a midground object would help with that. that's my only critique though.
well done Daniel -- Portfolio | Prints "Tomorrow will begin the first day of the rest of your life" // Thomas Koschwitz |
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Colours are great. The red obviously contrasts nicely with the blue sky (nice choice of blue, by the way), and the tones are very effective too in drawing the eye to the figure.
The only criticisms I have are: a) I think a little more space at the top would be good as to me the figure looks slightly hemmed-in by the top edge. Others may not have this same problem though; I think it's probably something that would depend on the viewer; and b) I find the signature in the bottom-right a little distracting (but talk about nit-picking!).
Lovely work with great contrasts between sun and shadow, and the concentration of colour to the top really helps make the figure pop.
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